A The student keeps journal updated in an outstanding manner. Notes, visuals, and reflections show consistent care and specifics in keeping a record of the learning process.
B The student keeps journal updated in a commendable manner. Notes, visuals, and reflections are generally of high quality in keeping a record of the learning process.
C The student keeps journal updated in a satisfactory manner. There are some notes, visuals, or reflections, but the quality seems to be inconsistent in keeping a record of the learning process.
D The student shows difficulty keeping the journal updated. There appears to be perfunctory effort in keeping a record of the learning process.
Based on preliminary scene improvisations, here is a rubric that the classes will discuss and utilize in class.
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Exemplary (A) |
Proficient (B) |
Developing (C) |
Emerging (D) |
| Script |
The conflict develops in a consistently logical and credible manner. |
The conflict develops with general logic and credibility. |
The conflict develops with some gaps in logic and credibility. |
The conflict develops in an apparently perfunctory, random manner. |
| Status |
The actors establish status and status changes in a consistently committed manner. Movement and speech enhance status portrayal. |
The actors establish status and status changes in a generally committed manner. Movement and speech are generally consistent with status portrayal. |
The actors sometimes establish status and status changes in a committed manner. Movement and speech are sometimes consistent with status portrayal. |
Status interaction is notably hampered by lack of commitment in one or more of the actors. Movement and speech generally detract from appropriate status portrayal. |
| Preparation |
Pacing, props, set pieces, and costumes notably enhance character and action. |
Pacing, props, set pieces, and costumes are generally consistent with character and action. |
Pacing, props, set pieces, and costumes are somewhat consistent with character and action. |
There is a clear lack of preparation in pacing, props, set pieces, and costumes consistent with character and action. |
Specific Comments for Script:
Specific Comments for Status Performance:
Specific Comments for Preparation:
Rubric for Performance of Published Monologue
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Level of Proficiency |
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4 |
3 |
2 |
1 |
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0 |
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Exemplary |
Proficient |
Developing |
Emerging |
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Insufficient Evidence |
| Vocal Skills |
Lines are delivered with consistent projection and clarity. |
Lines are, generally delivered with projection and clarity. |
Enough lines are delivered with projection and clarity for audience to understand the basic content of the monologue. |
Understanding the content of the monologue is compromised by lack of projection and/or clarity. |
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The audience could not hear the monologue. |
| Conflict |
The conflict is clearly established and built to a distinct and effective climax. |
The conflict is clearly established and built to a recognizable climax. |
The conflict is clearly established but there may be debate as to where the climax of the monologue is. |
The conflict is clearly established but there appears to be no climax. |
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The conflict is not established clearly and there appears to be no climax. |
| Beats |
Beat changes are varied and consistently believable. |
Beat changes are varied and generally believable. |
There appears to be some incorporation of believable beats. |
There appears to be very little incorporation of believable beats. |
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There appears to be no beat changes. |
| Characterization |
Character is distinct and played with outstanding commitment. |
There is a general commitment to distinct characterization. |
There is some attempt at distinct characterization. (This is the highest achievement level if character is dropped or visibility is compromised.) |
There appears to be little attempt at distinct characterization. |
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There appears to be no attempt at characterization. |
| Production Aspects |
Costume (and prop) remarkably enhances character and context. |
Costume (and prop) is functional in establishing character and context. |
Costume (and prop) is present but do not contribute to establishing character and context. |
Costume (and prop) gives misleading information about character and context. |
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There is no preparation of costume (and prop). |
1. Describe your strongest moment in detail.
2. Describe your weakest moment in detail.
I am aware that some groups have not presented their script readings to the class for feedback. They will do so next meeting. Having gone through a whole period of critiquing, everyone has an awareness of what we are looking for. Please refer to the partial rubric below.
This period, please rehearse the scenes you have written. Again, please refer to the rubric below to guide you. If, in the process of rehearsal, you recognize problems (in logic, flow, credibility, etc.), revise/refine your script in anticipation of a class critique this Friday. You will find that, with constant repetition and refinement today, your lines will be memorized. For homework, print out a new copy of your refined scripts and be prepared to perform this Friday.
To those whose partner is absent for any reason, revise your scene and bring the second draft to class next meeting. If you are satisfied with the rewrite, join another group as a responder and offer that group feedback. Please do not sit idly, as I will request our substitute teacher to add you to another group as a responder if she/he feels you are not using time productively. (To my Kind Substitute: Feel free to ask a group to perform to the class if it looks like they are “done” with their refinements.) Have the class critique them using the rubric.
This is the partial rubric for our original scenes. Movement and voice criteria will be incorporated next week.
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CHARACTERIZATION |
PLOT |
| A
Exemplary |
Characters are excellently established and developed through well-considered specifics in script and performance. |
The plot, as scripted, is completely logical in flow and develops to a powerful climax in performance. |
| B
Proficient |
Characters are credibly established and developed through appropriate specifics in script and performance. |
The plot, as scripted, is generally logical in flow and develops to an effective climax in performance. |
| C
Developing |
One or both of the characters are only sometimes credibly established and delineated through specifics in script and performance. |
The plot, as scripted, presents one or two notable problems in logical flow but develops to a recognizable climax in performance. |
| D
Emerging |
Both characters, in general, lack credibility in script and performance. |
The plot, as scripted, is generally problematic and illogical. A climax is lacking. |
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